4.07.2011

Nameless poem...

Okay, I wrote this poem sometime on Saturday and I don't have a name for it. So, if you would COMMENT maybe I could have a name by the end of the month... Anyways, here it is...


(the title would go here)

Lonely
Hurt
Call me beserk

Revealing
Naked
Everything you're seeing

Never looking inside
Seeing the tears I had to cry

Broken heart, hidden from the world
No one sees the pain I felt

Trying to mend pieces myself
I can't without Jesus's help

Dropping friends, left and right
No one can stop me, I've set my sight
Striving to be like Christ

I'll never get there, but I've got to try
Running a race, at the end I'll die
But at least God will be glorified


Well, that was it. Leave me a juicy comment about what you think!
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15 comments:

  1. JoceeApril 7, 2011 at 7:36 PM

    That's so cool!! I don't have a name for it now. Bummer. But it sounds like it could almost be like...a Christian rap song. Like improv. No music or anything, just straight up....rap. Does that make sense? I hope so, great poem :))
    -Jocee <3

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  2. JuliaApril 7, 2011 at 8:38 PM

    This is so awesome! But I am HORRIBLE at coming up with names... so I can't help you there. :( Great poem, though!

    ~Julia

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  3. ElisaApril 8, 2011 at 2:27 PM

    Nice poem! Sorry. I don't know a name though. :P :P lol
    http://elisa45.blogspot.com/
    ~Elisa:)

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  4. HannahApril 8, 2011 at 3:04 PM

    cool poem! I'm not good with names, so yeah. I like the meaning of the poem! But we won't die at the end, we'll live forever in Jesus. :D

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  5. Emily RoseApril 11, 2011 at 5:16 AM

    Beautiful! Sorry it took me so long to visit your blog, but count me as a follower now! I unfortunately can't think of a name right now either.:(

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  6. AnonymousApril 11, 2011 at 4:50 PM

    You could title it that last line. 'God Will Be Glorified'. :D

    ~Jamie Joyce

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  7. ShelleyApril 18, 2011 at 6:08 PM

    Nice poem Lani! I'm not good with names, I have a poem called The Poem because I don't know what to call it. But hope you get some helpful ideas! :)

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  8. Alexandra RobbinMay 10, 2011 at 8:09 PM

    I really like this! You could call it "The race" or "Running in place"!

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  9. Eve JoelleJune 23, 2011 at 12:18 AM

    Woohoo! I <3 it!
    Hmmm... as for a name...
    hmmm... i dunno...
    what about: ugh i dunno i am so bad at naming things...

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  10. lizSeptember 26, 2011 at 8:07 PM

    Uhmmm.....I stink at coming up with names. BUT if i come up with one I will let ya know! :))) I just love this blog so much!!! :)))

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  11. Isabel CarolineNovember 18, 2011 at 11:06 PM

    You caould call it "God's Race" you know.. since you said that you were running a race... and that God wil be glorifyed...

    ~Lily bellefluerphotography.blogspot.com

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  12. Molly ElizabethJanuary 14, 2012 at 1:31 PM

    I just found your blog through Pastor Girl's Ponderings...It is so cute! I love it! I hope you come peek at mine:www.sweetteaandpumps.blogspot.com

    :)
    molly.elizabeth

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  13. BufferFebruary 12, 2012 at 4:13 PM

    Hmmm, this is a good poem that needs a good title.. I was thinking Running In Place? :) Nice blog!

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  14. CarliFebruary 17, 2012 at 1:58 PM

    cool poem! good job!

    -carli

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  15. SydneyApril 17, 2012 at 7:26 AM

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